“The Traveling Onion,” is a poem written by
Nahomi Shihab Nye which, on the surface, tells the tale of not only the onion
that she cooks with, but also the life that all onions live. Now, others swear
that the poem is talking about more than just an onion; however, my imagination
has only stretched so far as to recognize the onion.
Nye was feeling very compassionate for the
onion that she had used in stew the night that she wrote “The Traveling Onion”.
That is, if she actually did make a stew that day, as she talks of in her poem.
She uses such words and phrases to describe
the nature of the onion that I actually felt sorry for not having given the
vegetable more credit earlier! It is clear that Nye feels that people do not
give onions the glory that they deserve. At mealtime, she says, we comment on
the “texture of meat or herbal aroma but never on the translucence of an onion”
(Nye).
Nye does well
to get her point across that she will not downsize the beauty of an onion. She
does not want them to be “something so small and forgotten” (Nye). Nye writes, “When
I think how far the onion has traveled/ just to enter my stew today/ I could
kneel and praise all small forgotten miracles.”
These small and forgotten miracles are so
abundant that we often over look them; however, we could praise even the
miracle of the onion plant sprouting from a seed. We could praise the plant
bearing the onion for its own sake and ours. We could praise the safe and
unharmed travel of the onion from its home to ours. Nye talks about the onion’s
history when she writes, “the way knife enters onion and onion falls apart on
the chopping block, a history revealed”. Onions are composed of “pearly layers
in smooth agreement”. Their layers tell of the history of its growth.
I really like what you wrote. I actually never thought about the poem in any other way than an onion having layers and that dealing with people who have problems. But reading your thoughts on the poem, I can see in a new light, I guess in a better light, giving the onion more credit than it deserves and how we could praise even the miracle of the onion plant sprouting from a seed.
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